"How did this happen... of all people why do I have to? I just wanted to live a normal and peaceful life!"
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8:00AM September 9th, 2013
"Wake up! Wake up! Wake up already!"
"W-what?" Ice replies in a drowsy voice while he hears his alarm clock and his sister yelling at the same time causing an uproar in his small bedroom full of anime goods.
"You're going to be late for the first day of high school, You know it's not middle school anymore...besides... i- it's not like I wanted you to make it to school on time you know."
"That's right sis. I'm now a average high school student named Ice Elwood ready to step into his adulthood of high school year! Besides the fact sis, you shouldn't aim for that tsundere status. You're too boyish for that."
As Ice scratches his eyes, yawns, and stretches, he finally notices the alarm clock's time and jumps up from the bed while smelling the fresh brewed morning coffee and a slight scent of the morning toast that is waiting for him. While getting up from the bed, his sister Aki without holding back, throws the knife at Ice barely missing him by an inch.
"What was that for? I almost died just now!"
"Shut up. "
Ice is thinking what he did wrong to make her mad like that to even throw a knife at him with such strong killing intent.
As Ice proceeds to open the window and smells the fresh air outside, he hears the young boys yelling and playing while the girls are strolling along relaxed with their bags. Ice quickly then remembers back at looking at the clock and remembered what time it is.
"Umm sis, is this clock right?"
As Ice ask in a slight scared tone while he looks at his sister with a nervous face and sees her face red and angry while she nods making Ice see a demon or satan inside of her.
Ice then quickly gets on his kness and holds his hands together while he begs for forgiveness and fake cries.
"Sis! I'm sorry! y ou have to let me go with you to school with your potential or else I 'm going to be late!"
The loving sister then puts on a smile but in a instant, her smile becomes a pissed face and with a flash, she disappeared into thin air leaving only her small trace of her scent .
"Ugh, late on first day of school.. how lame, everyone's gonna think I'm trying to seek attention or something... that sadistic sister of mine..."
He possible couldn't seek attention on the first day of high school like this due to his personality.
Ice then turned on the stove with a pot full of water and proceeded to turn on the computer while grabbing the blanket on his way.
*Bzzt*
The monitor shows Wondrows XP and a few second later shows his favorite anime wallpaper; TigerDragon.
In Ice's mind he has now completely forgot about school and had the sole intent of trolling the internet forums as his usual hobby is to troll the #channelers whenever he doesn't go to school.
At this moment Ice had the happiest smile he has ever had until he heard a angry voice behind him.
He knew what was going to happen to him now.
"What do you think you're doing?" As Ice hears an scary voice behind him that sounded like a devil.
Ice quickly then manually shut off the computer and got on his knees asking for forgiveness.
"Crap...Sorry.. PLEASE FORGIVE ME!"
Aki had a disappointed look as she grabbed onto Ice's arm making Ice feel a little tense.
"Ugh, Bro you're so hopeless.."
In less than a second the two brother and sister was now in front of the school sign that said " Potential High School"
It's as the school sign says, this school was built specially to test,train, and use potential users to their everyday lives. The kids are even separated because of this, making a person like me in the Beta rank while a useful potential user like Aki is in the Sigma rank.
"Hi Seto!" As Aki speaks in the happiest tone of her voice..
"Hey Aki, you missed me?"
Dammit I hate him so much... I can't believe my sister would date a bastard like him. I wonder if it's his potential ability or something that made my sister like him.
"So sis I guess you kissed Seto too since were near him and was able to transport to him"
"Well obviously! He's my boyfriend!"
"Are you jelly Ice? You sister lover"
At this point Ice had his hands formed into a fist and was ready to fight Seto, however Aki quickly enough, knew what was bound to happen so she quickly grabbed onto Seto's hands and jogged off while Seto looked back at Ice and smiled.
8:30AM September 9th, 2013.
"Hey Ice!"
As Ice turns around, he see two familiar faces. One with a goofy like smile,short in height, and long black.hair named Haru and the other being completely opposite with a sly smile. average in height, and short white hair.named Ikki.
"Yo! have you guys seen the new episode of Haroohi Soozuemeyah?" as Ice said in a sketchy tone while he frantically glance around the class for his crush Miya to be in the same class with him this year. Alas, the girl was nowhere to be seen in the class.
"I guess she wouldn't be in a class full of Beta potential users... heh."
High school is much different than before, kids and even adults are now separated into 7 ranks of people.after the 2012 mass reconstruction of the world, where people are now capable of using inhumane powers known as potentials which are separated into ranks, levels, and categories.
The 7 ranks are;
Beta- the lowest rank potential users which are considered the weakest and useless potential users.
Gamma- the 2nd lowest consisting of few useful potential users and has the most creativity category potential users.
Alpha- the 3rd lowest, known as the "regulars" with Alpha being most common potential users.
Sigma- This is where the gap widens amongst the ranks.After this ramk people are considered more valuable since most can use up to their 2nd level potential..
Epsilon- Known as "Elites". usually elites are full of the mental potentials amongst the 3 potential categories.
Upsilon- The "Kings" which has common potentials of the physical potentials.
Omega- Otherwise known as "Gods" these are the few potential users that have two or more potentials and/or has up to their 3rd level potential.
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"TAKE YOUR SEATS EVERYONE!!" As Mr.Goro screamed while entering the class
"Aww Goro Again?He transferred over to high school? Here goes another boring year of high school." as Haru's telepathy potential came talking to Ice's mind.
"Honestly not the boring Goro again." Wait...was that out loud?
Ice look around the class and confirmed that it was out loud.
My first day of high school and already made a fool of myself *sigh*.
Ice looked around the classroom once more to double check if Miya was in the same class but to his luck, she wasn't.
Ice thought to himself that maybe he could see her at least once before school ends.
"ICE STOP DAY DREAMING AT THE WINDOW AND WRITE DOWN THE NOTES!"
What a joy kill.
12:00PM September 9th , 2013, PE FIELD.
"Alright Betas, let's see now... run 10 laps around the school" as Mr.Goro spoke to the class as if he was annoyed.
"Tsk" " Fucking Goro" as the whole class moaned and whined while Ice's two friends were playing rock paper scissors deciding who will tell Mr.Goro about his zipper being unzipped.
The decisive match has ended, Ice lost.
As Ice raises his hand, he speaks out loud in front of the class to Mr.Goro.
"Mr.Goro your zipper is unzipped you better check it."
In a instance the whole class started blurting out in laughter while the infamous Mr.Goro was flustered and screamed to the kids to do 20 laps instead.
The whole class started to mumble and groan even more but started running since Mr.Goro would just give them even more laps if they continued.
At that moment, Ice saw her, Miya Hartfeld with her small face, her sparkling eyes, her blonde hair,...her everything that just makes you want to be with her.
"RUN FASTER BETAS!" as Goro just killed the mood and yelled.
Damn that Goro.
3PM-September 9th 2013- After School
"Aww are you serious it's raining?"
As Ice complained while putting out his hand in the rain to feel the droplet of rain fall on him.
Then in a moment time, he saw her, the goddess Miya Hartfeld that was walking in the rain with her friends while she laughed and walked at a steady pace.
"Wait! it's my time to use my potential- "Emotion aura" to get to know her better.. With this I can know the true feelings about how Miya feels about me."
"Yo Ice! wait up!"
He then turns around and sees his two friend waving and jogging towards him. while putting their backpack on top of their heads to make the rain not fall on them.
"Let me guess, you want me to share this umbrella with three guys right?"
"You guessed it." As Haru jumbled into the small space of the umbrella while Ikki slowly went towards the umbrella as well.
I guess I'll have to wait til next time with Miya.
3:05PM September 9th 2013 Split Road
"See ya" As Ice wave and part away with his friends as he watched the two friends dashes away in the strong rain.
"HEEEEEELP! PLEASE SOMEONE!"
That sounds familiar.. Is that who I think it is?
As Ice rushes over and approach the abandoned parking lot, he witnesses a familiar face with a girl's uniform from his school and a strange man with a black coat attacking the girl.
He looked closer and noticed the girl was his crush Miya.
"I can't possibly fight against a potential user... I'm just a beta.. what can I do? Should I call for help? Should I call over Haru and Ikki? What do I do?"
Either way.. I can't just stand here. I have to act now before I regret it like before.
"h-h-h-Hey y-y-you I don't think fighting against a girl is cool don't you think?" as Ice said in a shaky scared voice while his knees were knocking and trembling in the rain.
"Get lost, I don't have time to deal with you."
"Besides a potential user fighting against another potential user is illegal you know...and is considered vigilant"
:"That only matters if the government finds out kid. hahaha"
In that moment, Ice finally noticed a mark that made him stand in shock, he saw a Sigma mark on the strange man's forearm as soon as the man pulled his sleeves from his coat.
"I'm guessing your a beta trash right?"
The man was right. Ice is just a beta trash. He had no way of winning unless he found out the opponents potential.
""I grant thee fist level potential one day of my life, please make the water around that kid hot!"
Ice then noticed the steam rising from the water on the ground near him and stuck his hand out the umbrella and checked the water falling.
"What the hell....is this boiling water falling from the sky?"
"You guessed it Beta trash, my potential is to make water near a person hotter, freeze, or poisonous depending on what I decide."
"And it's raining..." as Ice thought to himself.
This is bad. I'm at a total disadvantage Am I going to die here? "How did this happen... of all people why do I have to? I just wanted to live a normal and peaceful life!"
The one advantage Ice had at this point now was the knowledge of the opponent's potential in which is one of the key basics in a fight against a potential vs potential.
" It can't be helped, I have no other choice but to use my potential... It's a race against time.. If my umbrella melts in the rain, I'll probably be burned to death with this water.."
"You're a thousand years too early to beat me kid. I'm bored now and I need to hurry and find the Time of Ark potential user. I Grant thee second level potential one month of my life, make the water around Elwood poisonous!"
My potential is... to find out their emotion and feelings within the aura... how can my potential work against him?
"This is bad... my potential won't work on a opponent like him..What can I do to win this match?.."
I have to think hard quickly...should I run out and attack him swiftly? Should I counterattack him somehow? think think think...That's it!
"Miya please let me see that"
Miya then quickly handed Ice the bag she was carrying and Ice quickly took out a mysterious item.
""It's over kid.. give up now and I'll let you off with a arm and a leg hahaha."
"After you revealed your potential..this match was already decided."
"What?" as the man questioned.
"Your ability is to make a clear aura around me to make the water change.. but it also means that any water near me will turn either hot, frozen or poisonous depending on your command."
"S-so? what about it? your words won't scare me"
"You know what this is right?, It's a canteen full of water... Actually it would be poison by now huh?"
"Crap... I GRANT THEE -" as the man spoke quick he was soon cut off by Ice
"Too late."
In a moment of seconds Ice opened the canteen and slashed the ooze like liquid on the man causing the man to cry in agony and pain.
"You could change the water as whatever you want but the one weakness you had is that you aren't immune to your own power...It's over. Game, set, match, ERASE."
"AHHH IT BURNS.... YOU.. YOU... THE SIGMA'S WONT BE QUIET ABOUT THIS!"
In a flash the man's existence disappeared, otherwise known as erased without leaving any trace of the man.
"Umm thank you for your help.." as Miya finally spoke with a scared yet soft tone.
"No prob! haha."
THUMP!
Suddenly the cute girl collapsed on the wet ground while the rain pours on her hard in the midst of her smiling.
This is so cliche... a guy saving a girl like this.. as Ice thought to himself while holding the girl softly in his arms.
"I better take her home before she gets sick."
Then Ice carried the girl Miya on his back while exiting the abandoned parking lot now full of melted poles, rubble, and destroyed ground.
"Interesting.. a beta winning against a sigma.. kukuku... I'll be expecting more Ice Elwood." Suddenly the other mysterious man that was hiding dispersed into the darkness.
"Weird. I felt someone's presence.. I guess not."
Potential rule 1: A person erased will reincarnate to a new existence with only 1% chance of getting a new potential without memories of his/her past existence.
CHAPTER 1 END
TO BE CONTINUED.
I have changed Ice's powers due to the other one's being too hard to use. I will follow up on 2nd chapter probably by Wednesday. Thank you to anyone following my blog.
Monday, January 2, 2012
Saturday, December 24, 2011
1 week....wait for me
Hello and happy holidays to anyone following my blogger! I will not be writing a new chapter for 4-7 days since i was lacking the common skills of writing and need to focus more on syntax.
I will be back in a week to see how much i have improved though.
I will be back in a week to see how much i have improved though.
Thursday, December 22, 2011
Limit of Potential
"How did this happen... of all people why do I have to? I just wanted to live a normal and peaceful life!"
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8:00AM September 9th, 2013
"Wake up! Wake up! Wake up already!"
"W-what?" Ice replies in a drowsy voice while he hears his alarm clock and his sister yelling at the same time causing an uproar in his small bedroom full of anime goods.
"You're going to be late for the first day of high school, You know it's not middle school anymore...besides... i- it's not like I wanted you to make it to school on time you know."
"That's right sis. I'm now a average high school student named Ice Elwood ready to step into his adulthood of high school year! Besides the fact sis, you shouldn't aim for that tsundere status. You're too boyish for that."
As Ice scratches his eyes, yawns, and stretches, he finally notices the alarm clock's time and jumps up from the bed while smelling the fresh brewed morning coffee and a slight scent of the morning toast that is waiting for him. While getting up from the bed, his sister Aki without holding back, throws the knife at Ice barely missing him by an inch.
"What was that for? I almost died just now!"
"Shut up. "
Ice is thinking what he did wrong to make her mad like that to even throw a knife at him with such strong killing intent.
As Ice proceeds to open the window and smells the fresh air outside, he hears the young boys yelling and playing while the girls are strolling along relaxed with their bags. Ice quickly then remembers back at looking at the clock and remembered what time it is.
"Umm sis, is this clock right?"
As Ice ask in a slight scared tone while he looks at his sister with a nervous face and sees her face red and angry while she nods making Ice see a demon or satan inside of her.
Ice then quickly gets on his kness and holds his hands together while he begs for forgiveness and fake cries.
"Sis! I'm sorry! y ou have to let me go with you to school with your potential or else I 'm going to be late!"
The loving sister then puts on a smile but in a instant, her smile becomes a pissed face and with a flash, she disappeared into thin air leaving only her small trace of her scent .
"Ugh, late on first day of school.. how lame, everyone's gonna think I'm trying to seek attention or something... that sadistic sister of mine..."
He possible couldn't seek attention on the first day of high school like this due to his personality.
Ice then turned on the stove with a pot full of water and proceeded to turn on the computer while grabbing the blanket on his way.
*Bzzt*
The monitor shows Wondrows XP and a few second later shows his favorite anime wallpaper; TigerDragon.
In Ice's mind he has now completely forgot about school and had the sole intent of trolling the internet forums as his usual hobby is to troll the #channelers whenever he doesn't go to school.
At this moment Ice had the happiest smile he has ever had until he heard a angry voice behind him.
He knew what was going to happen to him now.
"What do you think you're doing?" As Ice hears an scary voice behind him that sounded like a devil.
Ice quickly then manually shut off the computer and got on his knees asking for forgiveness.
"Crap...Sorry.. PLEASE FORGIVE ME!"
Aki had a disappointed look as she grabbed onto Ice's arm making Ice feel a little tense.
"Ugh, Bro you're so hopeless.."
In less than a second the two brother and sister was now in front of the school sign that said " Potential High School"
It's as the school sign says, this school was built specially to test,train, and use potential users to their everyday lives. The kids are even separated because of this, making a person like me in the Beta rank while a useful potential user like Aki is in the Sigma rank.
"Hi Seto!" As Aki speaks in the happiest tone of her voice..
"Hey Aki, you missed me?"
Dammit I hate him so much... I can't believe my sister would date a bastard like him. I wonder if it's his potential ability or something that made my sister like him.
"So sis I guess you kissed Seto too since were near him and was able to transport to him"
"Well obviously! He's my boyfriend!"
"Are you jelly Ice? You sister lover"
At this point Ice had his hands formed into a fist and was ready to fight Seto, however Aki quickly enough, knew what was bound to happen so she quickly grabbed onto Seto's hands and jogged off while Seto looked back at Ice and smiled.
8:30AM September 9th, 2013.
"Hey Ice!"
As Ice turns around, he see two familiar faces. One with a goofy like smile,short in height, and long black.hair named Haru and the other being completely opposite with a sly smile. average in height, and short white hair.named Ikki.
"Yo! have you guys seen the new episode of Haroohi Soozuemeyah?" as Ice said in a sketchy tone while he frantically glance around the class for his crush Miya to be in the same class with him this year. Alas, the girl was nowhere to be seen in the class.
"I guess she wouldn't be in a class full of Beta potential users... heh."
High school is much different than before, kids and even adults are now separated into 7 ranks of people.after the 2012 mass reconstruction of the world, where people are now capable of using inhumane powers known as potentials which are separated into ranks, levels, and categories.
The 7 ranks are;
Beta- the lowest rank potential users which are considered the weakest and useless potential users.
Gamma- the 2nd lowest consisting of few useful potential users and has the most creativity category potential users.
Alpha- the 3rd lowest, known as the "regulars" with Alpha being most common potential users.
Sigma- This is where the gap widens amongst the ranks.After this ramk people are considered more valuable since most can use up to their 2nd level potential..
Epsilon- Known as "Elites". usually elites are full of the mental potentials amongst the 3 potential categories.
Upsilon- The "Kings" which has common potentials of the physical potentials.
Omega- Otherwise known as "Gods" these are the few potential users that have two or more potentials and/or has up to their 3rd level potential.
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"TAKE YOUR SEATS EVERYONE!!" As Mr.Goro screamed while entering the class
"Aww Goro Again?He transferred over to high school? Here goes another boring year of high school." as Haru's telepathy potential came talking to Ice's mind.
"Honestly not the boring Goro again." Wait...was that out loud?
Ice look around the class and confirmed that it was out loud.
My first day of high school and already made a fool of myself *sigh*.
Ice looked around the classroom once more to double check if Miya was in the same class but to his luck, she wasn't.
Ice thought to himself that maybe he could see her at least once before school ends.
"ICE STOP DAY DREAMING AT THE WINDOW AND WRITE DOWN THE NOTES!"
What a joy kill.
12:00PM September 9th , 2013, PE FIELD.
"Alright Betas, let's see now... run 10 laps around the school" as Mr.Goro spoke to the class as if he was annoyed.
"Tsk" " Fucking Goro" as the whole class moaned and whined while Ice's two friends were playing rock paper scissors deciding who will tell Mr.Goro about his zipper being unzipped.
The decisive match has ended, Ice lost.
As Ice raises his hand, he speaks out loud in front of the class to Mr.Goro.
"Mr.Goro your zipper is unzipped you better check it."
In a instance the whole class started blurting out in laughter while the infamous Mr.Goro was flustered and screamed to the kids to do 20 laps instead.
The whole class started to mumble and groan even more but started running since Mr.Goro would just give them even more laps if they continued.
At that moment, Ice saw her, Miya Hartfeld with her small face, her sparkling eyes, her blonde hair,...her everything that just makes you want to be with her.
"RUN FASTER BETAS!" as Goro just killed the mood and yelled.
Damn that Goro.
3PM-September 9th 2013- After School
"Aww are you serious it's raining?"
As Ice complained while putting out his hand in the rain to feel the droplet of rain fall on him.
Then in a moment time, he saw her, the goddess Miya Hartfeld that was walking in the rain with her friends while she laughed and walked at a steady pace.
"Wait! it's my time to use my potential- "Chance" to get to know her better.. With this my chance will become higher by two fold!"
"Yo Ice! wait up!"
He then turns around and sees his two friend waving and jogging towards him. while putting their backpack on top of their heads to make the rain not fall on them.
"Let me guess, you want me to share this umbrella with three guys right?"
"You guessed it." As Haru jumbled into the small space of the umbrella while Ikki slowly went towards the umbrella as well.
I guess I had no chance after all with Miya.
3:05PM September 9th 2013 Split Road
"See ya" As Ice wave and part away with his friends as he watched the two friends dashes away in the strong rain.
"HEEEEEELP! PLEASE SOMEONE!"
That sounds familiar.. Is that who I think it is?
As Ice rushes over and approach the abandoned parking lot, he witnesses a familiar face with a girl's uniform from his school and a strange man with a black coat attacking the girl.
He looked closer and noticed the girl was his crush Miya.
"I can't possibly fight against a potential user... I'm just a beta.. what can I do? Should I call for help? Should I call over Haru and Ikki? What do I do?"
Either way.. I can't just stand here. I have to act now before I regret it like before.
"h-h-h-Hey y-y-you I don't think fighting against a girl is cool don't you think?" as Ice said in a shaky scared voice while his knees were knocking and trembling in the rain.
"Get lost, I don't have time to deal with you."
"Besides a potential user fighting against another potential user is illegal you know...and is considered vigilant"
:"That only matters if the government finds out kid. hahaha"
In that moment, Ice finally noticed a mark that made him stand in shock, he saw a Sigma mark on the strange man's forearm as soon as the man pulled his sleeves from his coat.
"I'm guessing your a beta trash right?"
The man was right. Ice is just a beta trash. He had no way of winning unless he found out the opponents potential.
""I grant thee fist level potential one day of my life, please make the water around that kid hot!"
Ice then noticed the steam rising from the water on the ground near him and stuck his hand out the umbrella and checked the water falling.
"What the hell....is this boiling water falling from the sky?"
"You guessed it Beta trash, my potential is to make water near a person hotter, freeze, or poisonous depending on what I decide."
"And it's raining..." as Ice thought to himself.
This is bad. I'm at a total disadvantage Am I going to die here? "How did this happen... of all people why do I have to? I just wanted to live a normal and peaceful life!"
The one advantage Ice had at this point now was the knowledge of the opponent's potential in which is one of the key basics in a fight against a potential vs potential.
" It can't be helped, I have no other choice but to use my 2nd level potential... It's a race against time.. If my umbrella melts in the rain, I'll probably be burned to death with this water.."
"You're a thousand years too early to beat me kid. I'm bored now and I need to hurry and find the Time of Ark potential user. I Grant thee second level potential one month of my life, make the water around Elwood poisonous!"
My 2nd level potential is... luck... how can I be lucky enough to survive?
"This is bad... my 2nd level won't work on a opponent like him.. Do I have to use my 3rd level? It's been a secret but no one is here besides us so I have no choice.."
"I grant thee third level potential one year of my life, please make a miracle happen!"
Ice stood still in fear scared that nothing has happened. But in a flash, a plan came into his mind miraculously.
"Miya please let me see that"
Miya then quickly handed Ice the bag she was carrying and Ice quickly took out a mysterious item.
""It's over kid.. give up now and I'll let you off with a arm and a leg hahaha."
"After you revealed your potential..this match was already decided."
"What?" as the man questioned.
"Your ability is to make a clear aura around me to make the water change.. but it also means that any water near me will turn either hot, frozen or poisonous depending on your command."
"S-so? what about it? your words won't scare me"
"You know what this is right?, It's a canteen full of water... Actually it would be poison by now huh?"
"Crap... I GRANT THEE -" as the man spoke quick he was soon cut off by Ice
"Too late."
In a moment of seconds Ice opened the canteen and slashed the ooze like liquid on the man causing the man to cry in agony and pain.
"You could change the water as whatever you want but the one weakness you had is that you aren't immune to your own power...It's over. Game, set, match, ERASE."
"AHHH IT BURNS.... YOU.. YOU... THE SIGMA'S WONT BE QUIET ABOUT THIS!"
In a flash the man's existence disappeared, otherwise known as erased without leaving any trace of the man.
"Umm thank you for your help.." as Miya finally spoke with a scared yet soft tone.
"No prob! haha."
THUMP!
Suddenly the cute girl collapsed on the wet ground while the rain pours on her hard in the midst of her smiling.
This is so cliche... a guy saving a girl like this.. as Ice thought to himself while holding the girl softly in his arms.
"I better take her home before she gets sick."
Then Ice carried the girl Miya on his back while exiting the abandoned parking lot now full of melted poles, rubble, and destroyed ground.
"Interesting.. a beta using up to level 3 of his potential and winning against a sigma.. kukuku... I'll be expecting more Ice Elwood." Suddenly the other mysterious man that was hiding dispersed into the darkness.
"Weird. I felt someone's presence.. I guess not."
Potential rule 1: A person erased will reincarnate to a new existence with only 1% chance of getting a new potential.
CHAPTER 1 END
TO BE CONTINUED.
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8:00AM September 9th, 2013
"Wake up! Wake up! Wake up already!"
"W-what?" Ice replies in a drowsy voice while he hears his alarm clock and his sister yelling at the same time causing an uproar in his small bedroom full of anime goods.
"You're going to be late for the first day of high school, You know it's not middle school anymore...besides... i- it's not like I wanted you to make it to school on time you know."
"That's right sis. I'm now a average high school student named Ice Elwood ready to step into his adulthood of high school year! Besides the fact sis, you shouldn't aim for that tsundere status. You're too boyish for that."
As Ice scratches his eyes, yawns, and stretches, he finally notices the alarm clock's time and jumps up from the bed while smelling the fresh brewed morning coffee and a slight scent of the morning toast that is waiting for him. While getting up from the bed, his sister Aki without holding back, throws the knife at Ice barely missing him by an inch.
"What was that for? I almost died just now!"
"Shut up. "
Ice is thinking what he did wrong to make her mad like that to even throw a knife at him with such strong killing intent.
As Ice proceeds to open the window and smells the fresh air outside, he hears the young boys yelling and playing while the girls are strolling along relaxed with their bags. Ice quickly then remembers back at looking at the clock and remembered what time it is.
"Umm sis, is this clock right?"
As Ice ask in a slight scared tone while he looks at his sister with a nervous face and sees her face red and angry while she nods making Ice see a demon or satan inside of her.
Ice then quickly gets on his kness and holds his hands together while he begs for forgiveness and fake cries.
"Sis! I'm sorry! y ou have to let me go with you to school with your potential or else I 'm going to be late!"
The loving sister then puts on a smile but in a instant, her smile becomes a pissed face and with a flash, she disappeared into thin air leaving only her small trace of her scent .
"Ugh, late on first day of school.. how lame, everyone's gonna think I'm trying to seek attention or something... that sadistic sister of mine..."
He possible couldn't seek attention on the first day of high school like this due to his personality.
Ice then turned on the stove with a pot full of water and proceeded to turn on the computer while grabbing the blanket on his way.
*Bzzt*
The monitor shows Wondrows XP and a few second later shows his favorite anime wallpaper; TigerDragon.
In Ice's mind he has now completely forgot about school and had the sole intent of trolling the internet forums as his usual hobby is to troll the #channelers whenever he doesn't go to school.
At this moment Ice had the happiest smile he has ever had until he heard a angry voice behind him.
He knew what was going to happen to him now.
"What do you think you're doing?" As Ice hears an scary voice behind him that sounded like a devil.
Ice quickly then manually shut off the computer and got on his knees asking for forgiveness.
"Crap...Sorry.. PLEASE FORGIVE ME!"
Aki had a disappointed look as she grabbed onto Ice's arm making Ice feel a little tense.
"Ugh, Bro you're so hopeless.."
In less than a second the two brother and sister was now in front of the school sign that said " Potential High School"
It's as the school sign says, this school was built specially to test,train, and use potential users to their everyday lives. The kids are even separated because of this, making a person like me in the Beta rank while a useful potential user like Aki is in the Sigma rank.
"Hi Seto!" As Aki speaks in the happiest tone of her voice..
"Hey Aki, you missed me?"
Dammit I hate him so much... I can't believe my sister would date a bastard like him. I wonder if it's his potential ability or something that made my sister like him.
"So sis I guess you kissed Seto too since were near him and was able to transport to him"
"Well obviously! He's my boyfriend!"
"Are you jelly Ice? You sister lover"
At this point Ice had his hands formed into a fist and was ready to fight Seto, however Aki quickly enough, knew what was bound to happen so she quickly grabbed onto Seto's hands and jogged off while Seto looked back at Ice and smiled.
8:30AM September 9th, 2013.
"Hey Ice!"
As Ice turns around, he see two familiar faces. One with a goofy like smile,short in height, and long black.hair named Haru and the other being completely opposite with a sly smile. average in height, and short white hair.named Ikki.
"Yo! have you guys seen the new episode of Haroohi Soozuemeyah?" as Ice said in a sketchy tone while he frantically glance around the class for his crush Miya to be in the same class with him this year. Alas, the girl was nowhere to be seen in the class.
"I guess she wouldn't be in a class full of Beta potential users... heh."
High school is much different than before, kids and even adults are now separated into 7 ranks of people.after the 2012 mass reconstruction of the world, where people are now capable of using inhumane powers known as potentials which are separated into ranks, levels, and categories.
The 7 ranks are;
Beta- the lowest rank potential users which are considered the weakest and useless potential users.
Gamma- the 2nd lowest consisting of few useful potential users and has the most creativity category potential users.
Alpha- the 3rd lowest, known as the "regulars" with Alpha being most common potential users.
Sigma- This is where the gap widens amongst the ranks.After this ramk people are considered more valuable since most can use up to their 2nd level potential..
Epsilon- Known as "Elites". usually elites are full of the mental potentials amongst the 3 potential categories.
Upsilon- The "Kings" which has common potentials of the physical potentials.
Omega- Otherwise known as "Gods" these are the few potential users that have two or more potentials and/or has up to their 3rd level potential.
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"TAKE YOUR SEATS EVERYONE!!" As Mr.Goro screamed while entering the class
"Aww Goro Again?He transferred over to high school? Here goes another boring year of high school." as Haru's telepathy potential came talking to Ice's mind.
"Honestly not the boring Goro again." Wait...was that out loud?
Ice look around the class and confirmed that it was out loud.
My first day of high school and already made a fool of myself *sigh*.
Ice looked around the classroom once more to double check if Miya was in the same class but to his luck, she wasn't.
Ice thought to himself that maybe he could see her at least once before school ends.
"ICE STOP DAY DREAMING AT THE WINDOW AND WRITE DOWN THE NOTES!"
What a joy kill.
12:00PM September 9th , 2013, PE FIELD.
"Alright Betas, let's see now... run 10 laps around the school" as Mr.Goro spoke to the class as if he was annoyed.
"Tsk" " Fucking Goro" as the whole class moaned and whined while Ice's two friends were playing rock paper scissors deciding who will tell Mr.Goro about his zipper being unzipped.
The decisive match has ended, Ice lost.
As Ice raises his hand, he speaks out loud in front of the class to Mr.Goro.
"Mr.Goro your zipper is unzipped you better check it."
In a instance the whole class started blurting out in laughter while the infamous Mr.Goro was flustered and screamed to the kids to do 20 laps instead.
The whole class started to mumble and groan even more but started running since Mr.Goro would just give them even more laps if they continued.
At that moment, Ice saw her, Miya Hartfeld with her small face, her sparkling eyes, her blonde hair,...her everything that just makes you want to be with her.
"RUN FASTER BETAS!" as Goro just killed the mood and yelled.
Damn that Goro.
3PM-September 9th 2013- After School
"Aww are you serious it's raining?"
As Ice complained while putting out his hand in the rain to feel the droplet of rain fall on him.
Then in a moment time, he saw her, the goddess Miya Hartfeld that was walking in the rain with her friends while she laughed and walked at a steady pace.
"Wait! it's my time to use my potential- "Chance" to get to know her better.. With this my chance will become higher by two fold!"
"Yo Ice! wait up!"
He then turns around and sees his two friend waving and jogging towards him. while putting their backpack on top of their heads to make the rain not fall on them.
"Let me guess, you want me to share this umbrella with three guys right?"
"You guessed it." As Haru jumbled into the small space of the umbrella while Ikki slowly went towards the umbrella as well.
I guess I had no chance after all with Miya.
3:05PM September 9th 2013 Split Road
"See ya" As Ice wave and part away with his friends as he watched the two friends dashes away in the strong rain.
"HEEEEEELP! PLEASE SOMEONE!"
That sounds familiar.. Is that who I think it is?
As Ice rushes over and approach the abandoned parking lot, he witnesses a familiar face with a girl's uniform from his school and a strange man with a black coat attacking the girl.
He looked closer and noticed the girl was his crush Miya.
"I can't possibly fight against a potential user... I'm just a beta.. what can I do? Should I call for help? Should I call over Haru and Ikki? What do I do?"
Either way.. I can't just stand here. I have to act now before I regret it like before.
"h-h-h-Hey y-y-you I don't think fighting against a girl is cool don't you think?" as Ice said in a shaky scared voice while his knees were knocking and trembling in the rain.
"Get lost, I don't have time to deal with you."
"Besides a potential user fighting against another potential user is illegal you know...and is considered vigilant"
:"That only matters if the government finds out kid. hahaha"
In that moment, Ice finally noticed a mark that made him stand in shock, he saw a Sigma mark on the strange man's forearm as soon as the man pulled his sleeves from his coat.
"I'm guessing your a beta trash right?"
The man was right. Ice is just a beta trash. He had no way of winning unless he found out the opponents potential.
""I grant thee fist level potential one day of my life, please make the water around that kid hot!"
Ice then noticed the steam rising from the water on the ground near him and stuck his hand out the umbrella and checked the water falling.
"What the hell....is this boiling water falling from the sky?"
"You guessed it Beta trash, my potential is to make water near a person hotter, freeze, or poisonous depending on what I decide."
"And it's raining..." as Ice thought to himself.
This is bad. I'm at a total disadvantage Am I going to die here? "How did this happen... of all people why do I have to? I just wanted to live a normal and peaceful life!"
The one advantage Ice had at this point now was the knowledge of the opponent's potential in which is one of the key basics in a fight against a potential vs potential.
" It can't be helped, I have no other choice but to use my 2nd level potential... It's a race against time.. If my umbrella melts in the rain, I'll probably be burned to death with this water.."
"You're a thousand years too early to beat me kid. I'm bored now and I need to hurry and find the Time of Ark potential user. I Grant thee second level potential one month of my life, make the water around Elwood poisonous!"
My 2nd level potential is... luck... how can I be lucky enough to survive?
"This is bad... my 2nd level won't work on a opponent like him.. Do I have to use my 3rd level? It's been a secret but no one is here besides us so I have no choice.."
"I grant thee third level potential one year of my life, please make a miracle happen!"
Ice stood still in fear scared that nothing has happened. But in a flash, a plan came into his mind miraculously.
"Miya please let me see that"
Miya then quickly handed Ice the bag she was carrying and Ice quickly took out a mysterious item.
""It's over kid.. give up now and I'll let you off with a arm and a leg hahaha."
"After you revealed your potential..this match was already decided."
"What?" as the man questioned.
"Your ability is to make a clear aura around me to make the water change.. but it also means that any water near me will turn either hot, frozen or poisonous depending on your command."
"S-so? what about it? your words won't scare me"
"You know what this is right?, It's a canteen full of water... Actually it would be poison by now huh?"
"Crap... I GRANT THEE -" as the man spoke quick he was soon cut off by Ice
"Too late."
In a moment of seconds Ice opened the canteen and slashed the ooze like liquid on the man causing the man to cry in agony and pain.
"You could change the water as whatever you want but the one weakness you had is that you aren't immune to your own power...It's over. Game, set, match, ERASE."
"AHHH IT BURNS.... YOU.. YOU... THE SIGMA'S WONT BE QUIET ABOUT THIS!"
In a flash the man's existence disappeared, otherwise known as erased without leaving any trace of the man.
"Umm thank you for your help.." as Miya finally spoke with a scared yet soft tone.
"No prob! haha."
THUMP!
Suddenly the cute girl collapsed on the wet ground while the rain pours on her hard in the midst of her smiling.
This is so cliche... a guy saving a girl like this.. as Ice thought to himself while holding the girl softly in his arms.
"I better take her home before she gets sick."
Then Ice carried the girl Miya on his back while exiting the abandoned parking lot now full of melted poles, rubble, and destroyed ground.
"Interesting.. a beta using up to level 3 of his potential and winning against a sigma.. kukuku... I'll be expecting more Ice Elwood." Suddenly the other mysterious man that was hiding dispersed into the darkness.
"Weird. I felt someone's presence.. I guess not."
Potential rule 1: A person erased will reincarnate to a new existence with only 1% chance of getting a new potential.
CHAPTER 1 END
TO BE CONTINUED.
Wednesday, December 21, 2011
Potential With in us. ( Kagirareta kanousei) REdone.
"How did this happen... of all people why do I have to? I just wanted to live a normal and peaceful way!"
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8:00AM September 9th, 2013
"Wake up.. Wake up!!! WAKE UP ALREADY!!"
"W-what?" as I reply in a drowsy voice while I hear my tomboy sister yell in a slight angry voice.
"You're going to be late for the first day of high school, You know it's not middle school anymore."
"That's right. I'm now an average high school student named Cory Elwood ready to step into his adulthood of high school year!"
"Here I g-.... Umm sis, is this clock right?" As I ask in a slight scared tone.
"Yeah Ice, I tried waking you up but you wouldn't wake up."
Some people just call me by my nickname Ice since apparently Cory means Ice in Japanese... what am I doing talking to my self?? I don't have time for that!
"Sis! you have to let me go with you to school with your potential or else I 'm going to be late!!"
"Too bad, You get what you deserve hehehe"
In a flash, my sister was gone and more than likely at school by now.
"Ugh, late on first day of school.. how lame, everyone's gonna think I'm trying to seek attention or something... that sadistic sister of mine.."
"Hmm.. you know what, If I'm going to be late, I mind as well not go to school haha. Time to go boil some water for my cup noodles and turn on my PC"
*Bzzt*
The monitor shows Wondrows XP and a few second later shows his favorite anime wallpaper; TigerDragon
"Time to go troll the internet forums... hehehe.. should I start with 4chan? But trolling 2chan is funny as well.. today is going to be a fun day hehehehe"
At this moment Ice had the happiest smile he has ever had until he heard a angry demon's voice behind him.
"What do you think you're doing?" As I hear a scary voice behind me I saw my death already.
"Crap...Sorry.. PLEASE FORGIVE ME!"
"Ugh, Bro you're so hopeless.." as she said in a disappointed tone, we saw a quick flash and was in front of the school.
"HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE??" you ask?, Well my sister is an potential user that has the ability to transport to anyone who she kisses with the cost of her life span of 1minute-1year.depending on the situation
Wait who am I talking to... anyways...
"Hi Seto!" As I hear my sister say in the happiest tone of her voice.
"Hey Aki, you missed me?" as Seto said in a arrogant way.
"Ugh you guys are so disgusting, go get a room or something."
"Are you jelly Ice?"
Dammit I hate him so much... I can't believe my sister would date a bastard like him. I wonder if it's his potential ability or something that made my sister like him.
"Haha no way Seto, who would go so low to date someone like my sister."
BAM
"Ouch.. I saw that coming."
8:30AM September 9th, 2013.
"Hey Ice!"
As I turn around, I see two familiar faces who are Haru and Ikki my two childhood friends.
"Yo! have you guys seen the new episode of Haroohi Soozuemeyah?" as I said in a sketchy tone while I frantically glance around the class for my crush Miya to be in the same class this year.
Nowhere to be seen
"I guess she wouldn't be in a class full of Beta potential users... heh."
High school is much different than before, kids and even adults are now separated into 7 ranks of people.after the 2012 mass reconstruction of the world, where people are now capable of using inhumane powers known as potentials which are separated into ranks, levels, and categories.
The 7 ranks are;
Beta- the lowest and weakest potential users which are among the weakest and useless potential users.
Gamma- the 2nd lowest consisting of few useful potential users and has the most creativity category potential users.
Alpha- the 3rd lowest, known as the "regulars" with Alpha being most common potential users.
Sigma- This is where the gap widens amongst the ranks.After this ramk people are considered more valuable since most can use up to their 2nd level potential..
Epsilon- Known as "Elites". usually elites are full of the mental potentials amongst the 3 potential categories.
Upsilon- The "Kings" which has common potentials of the physical potentials.
Omega- Otherwise known as "Gods" these are the few potential users that have two or more potentials and/or has up to their 3rd level potential.
"TAKE YOUR SEAT EVERYONE!!" As Mr.Goro our teacher walked in the class.
"Goro Again??He transferred over to high school? Here goes another boring year of high school." as Haru's telepathy potential came talking to my mind.
"Honestly not the boring Goro again." Wait...was that out loud?
I look around the class and confirmed that it was out loud.
My first day of high school and already made a fool of myself *sigh*.
12:00PM September 9th , 2013, PE FIELD.
"Alright Betas, let's see... run 10 laps around the school" as Mr.Goro looked bored
"AWWWW" "WHY" "DAMMIT" as the whole class moaned and whined.
"Start now or it will be 20 laps!"
"Ugh why does the Alpha, Epsilon, and them get free time but we have to run?" (class)
"It's because you guys are betas. NOW GO!" As goro screamed at top of his lungs.
At that moment, I saw her, Miya Hartfeld with her small face, her sparkling eyes, her ... everything that just makes you want to be with her.
"RUN FASTER BETAS!" as Goro just killed the mood and yelled.
Damn that Goro.
3PM-September 9th 2013- After School
"Aww are you serious it's raining??" As I complained but then I saw her again, Miya my crush in the rain...wait.a second, is she dancing?
"Wait! it's my time to use my potential- Chance.to get to know her better.. With this my chance will become higher by two fold."
"Yo Ice!! wait up!"
"Dammit. " As I turn around I see Haru and Ikki waving and walking towards me.
"Sup guys." As i turn back around. I see Miya walk away,
I guess I had no chance after all.
3:05PM September 9th 2013 Split Road
"See ya" As I wave and part away with my friends with a smile.
"HEEEEEELP! PLEASE SOMEONE!"
That sounds familiar.. Is that who I think it is?
As I rush over and approach to the scene catching my breath, I witness my crush Miya being attacked by a kid from our school with a Sigma tattoo on his forearm.
"I can't possibly win against a Sigma... I'm just a beta.. what can I do? Should I call for help? Should I call over Haru and Ikki? What do I do??"
Either way.. I can't just stand here. I have to act now before I regret it like before.
"h-h-h-Hey y-y-you I don't think fighting against a girl is cool don't you think?" as i said in a shaky scared voice.
"Get lost, I don't have time to deal with you."
"Oh is that so? I'm a upsilon rank potential user.."
"Is that why I see a beta tattoo on your neck?"
Crap I forgot we just got our rank imprinted today.
"Well this is you know, just for designs hehe..besides you do know a potentials user fighting against another potential user is against the law and is deemed Vigilante with out permission right?"
"It's only illegal and considered vigilante if I get caught..... enough talk. its time for both of you to die."
""I grant thee fist level potential one day of my life, please make the water around Elwood hot!"
"What the hell....is this boiling water falling from the sky?"
"You guessed it Beta trash, my potential is to make water near a person hotter, colder, or poisonous"
"And it's raining..." This is bad. I'm at a total disadvantage Am I going to die here? "How did this happen... of all people why do I have to? I just wanted to live a normal and peaceful way!"
" I have no other choice but to use my 2nd level potential... It's a race against time.. If my umbrella melts in the rain, I'll probably be burned to death with this water.."
"I'm bored I need to hurry and find the time potential user, I Grant thee second level potential one month of my life, make the water around Elwood poisonous!"
My 2nd level potential is... luck how can I be lucky enough to survive?
"This is bad... my 2nd level won't work on a opponent like him.. Do I have to use my 3rd level? It's been a secret but no one is here besides us so I have no choice.."
"I grant thee third level potential one year of my life, please make a miracle happen!"
Then in a moment I felt the time of my life span withdrawn but miraculously a plan to win came in my mind.
"Miya please let me see that"
Then Miya quickly handed Ice the bag she was carrying and Ice quickly took out a mysterious item.
"It's over Ice.. give up now and I'll let you off with a arm and a leg hahaha."
"After you revealed your potential..this match was already decided."
"What?" as the boy questioned.
"Your ability is to make a clear aura around me to make the water change.. but it also means that any water near me will turn either hot,cold. or poisonous depending on your command."
"S-so? what about it? your words won't scare me" the mysterious boy looked in fear.
"You know what this is right?, It's a canteen full of water... Actually it would be poison now huh?"
"Crap... I GRANT THEE -" as the boy spoke
"Too late."
In a moment of seconds Ice opened the canteen and slashed the ooze like liquid on the mysterious boy causing the boy to cry in agony and pain.
"Game, set, match, ERASE."
"AHHH IT BURNS.... YOU.. YOU... THE SIGMA'S WONT BE QUIET ABOUT THIS!"
In a flash the boy's existence disappeared, otherwise known as erased.
"Umm thank you for your help.." as Miya finally spoke with a scared tone.
"No prob! haha."
THUMP!
Suddenly the cute girl collapsed in the wet ground while the rain pours on her hard in the midst of her smiling.
This is so cliche... a guy saving a girl he like this haha. as Ice thought to himself.
"I better take her home before she gets sick."
"Interesting.. a beta using up to level 3 of his potential and winning against a sigma.. kukuku... I'll be expecting more Ice Elwood." Then the mysterious man dispersed into the darkness.
"Weird. I felt someone's presence.. I guess not."
Potential rule 1: A person erased will reincarnate to a new without his potential ability..
CHAPTER 1 END
TO BE CONTINUED.
Please comment and critique my light novel. I took in a few advices from /a/ and will try to redo this story once i get more advices.
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8:00AM September 9th, 2013
"Wake up.. Wake up!!! WAKE UP ALREADY!!"
"W-what?" as I reply in a drowsy voice while I hear my tomboy sister yell in a slight angry voice.
"You're going to be late for the first day of high school, You know it's not middle school anymore."
"That's right. I'm now an average high school student named Cory Elwood ready to step into his adulthood of high school year!"
"Here I g-.... Umm sis, is this clock right?" As I ask in a slight scared tone.
"Yeah Ice, I tried waking you up but you wouldn't wake up."
Some people just call me by my nickname Ice since apparently Cory means Ice in Japanese... what am I doing talking to my self?? I don't have time for that!
"Sis! you have to let me go with you to school with your potential or else I 'm going to be late!!"
"Too bad, You get what you deserve hehehe"
In a flash, my sister was gone and more than likely at school by now.
"Ugh, late on first day of school.. how lame, everyone's gonna think I'm trying to seek attention or something... that sadistic sister of mine.."
"Hmm.. you know what, If I'm going to be late, I mind as well not go to school haha. Time to go boil some water for my cup noodles and turn on my PC"
*Bzzt*
The monitor shows Wondrows XP and a few second later shows his favorite anime wallpaper; TigerDragon
"Time to go troll the internet forums... hehehe.. should I start with 4chan? But trolling 2chan is funny as well.. today is going to be a fun day hehehehe"
At this moment Ice had the happiest smile he has ever had until he heard a angry demon's voice behind him.
"What do you think you're doing?" As I hear a scary voice behind me I saw my death already.
"Crap...Sorry.. PLEASE FORGIVE ME!"
"Ugh, Bro you're so hopeless.." as she said in a disappointed tone, we saw a quick flash and was in front of the school.
"HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE??" you ask?, Well my sister is an potential user that has the ability to transport to anyone who she kisses with the cost of her life span of 1minute-1year.depending on the situation
Wait who am I talking to... anyways...
"Hi Seto!" As I hear my sister say in the happiest tone of her voice.
"Hey Aki, you missed me?" as Seto said in a arrogant way.
"Ugh you guys are so disgusting, go get a room or something."
"Are you jelly Ice?"
Dammit I hate him so much... I can't believe my sister would date a bastard like him. I wonder if it's his potential ability or something that made my sister like him.
"Haha no way Seto, who would go so low to date someone like my sister."
BAM
"Ouch.. I saw that coming."
8:30AM September 9th, 2013.
"Hey Ice!"
As I turn around, I see two familiar faces who are Haru and Ikki my two childhood friends.
"Yo! have you guys seen the new episode of Haroohi Soozuemeyah?" as I said in a sketchy tone while I frantically glance around the class for my crush Miya to be in the same class this year.
Nowhere to be seen
"I guess she wouldn't be in a class full of Beta potential users... heh."
High school is much different than before, kids and even adults are now separated into 7 ranks of people.after the 2012 mass reconstruction of the world, where people are now capable of using inhumane powers known as potentials which are separated into ranks, levels, and categories.
The 7 ranks are;
Beta- the lowest and weakest potential users which are among the weakest and useless potential users.
Gamma- the 2nd lowest consisting of few useful potential users and has the most creativity category potential users.
Alpha- the 3rd lowest, known as the "regulars" with Alpha being most common potential users.
Sigma- This is where the gap widens amongst the ranks.After this ramk people are considered more valuable since most can use up to their 2nd level potential..
Epsilon- Known as "Elites". usually elites are full of the mental potentials amongst the 3 potential categories.
Upsilon- The "Kings" which has common potentials of the physical potentials.
Omega- Otherwise known as "Gods" these are the few potential users that have two or more potentials and/or has up to their 3rd level potential.
"TAKE YOUR SEAT EVERYONE!!" As Mr.Goro our teacher walked in the class.
"Goro Again??He transferred over to high school? Here goes another boring year of high school." as Haru's telepathy potential came talking to my mind.
"Honestly not the boring Goro again." Wait...was that out loud?
I look around the class and confirmed that it was out loud.
My first day of high school and already made a fool of myself *sigh*.
12:00PM September 9th , 2013, PE FIELD.
"Alright Betas, let's see... run 10 laps around the school" as Mr.Goro looked bored
"AWWWW" "WHY" "DAMMIT" as the whole class moaned and whined.
"Start now or it will be 20 laps!"
"Ugh why does the Alpha, Epsilon, and them get free time but we have to run?" (class)
"It's because you guys are betas. NOW GO!" As goro screamed at top of his lungs.
At that moment, I saw her, Miya Hartfeld with her small face, her sparkling eyes, her ... everything that just makes you want to be with her.
"RUN FASTER BETAS!" as Goro just killed the mood and yelled.
Damn that Goro.
3PM-September 9th 2013- After School
"Aww are you serious it's raining??" As I complained but then I saw her again, Miya my crush in the rain...wait.a second, is she dancing?
"Wait! it's my time to use my potential- Chance.to get to know her better.. With this my chance will become higher by two fold."
"Yo Ice!! wait up!"
"Dammit. " As I turn around I see Haru and Ikki waving and walking towards me.
"Sup guys." As i turn back around. I see Miya walk away,
I guess I had no chance after all.
3:05PM September 9th 2013 Split Road
"See ya" As I wave and part away with my friends with a smile.
"HEEEEEELP! PLEASE SOMEONE!"
That sounds familiar.. Is that who I think it is?
As I rush over and approach to the scene catching my breath, I witness my crush Miya being attacked by a kid from our school with a Sigma tattoo on his forearm.
"I can't possibly win against a Sigma... I'm just a beta.. what can I do? Should I call for help? Should I call over Haru and Ikki? What do I do??"
Either way.. I can't just stand here. I have to act now before I regret it like before.
"h-h-h-Hey y-y-you I don't think fighting against a girl is cool don't you think?" as i said in a shaky scared voice.
"Get lost, I don't have time to deal with you."
"Oh is that so? I'm a upsilon rank potential user.."
"Is that why I see a beta tattoo on your neck?"
Crap I forgot we just got our rank imprinted today.
"Well this is you know, just for designs hehe..besides you do know a potentials user fighting against another potential user is against the law and is deemed Vigilante with out permission right?"
"It's only illegal and considered vigilante if I get caught..... enough talk. its time for both of you to die."
""I grant thee fist level potential one day of my life, please make the water around Elwood hot!"
"What the hell....is this boiling water falling from the sky?"
"You guessed it Beta trash, my potential is to make water near a person hotter, colder, or poisonous"
"And it's raining..." This is bad. I'm at a total disadvantage Am I going to die here? "How did this happen... of all people why do I have to? I just wanted to live a normal and peaceful way!"
" I have no other choice but to use my 2nd level potential... It's a race against time.. If my umbrella melts in the rain, I'll probably be burned to death with this water.."
"I'm bored I need to hurry and find the time potential user, I Grant thee second level potential one month of my life, make the water around Elwood poisonous!"
My 2nd level potential is... luck how can I be lucky enough to survive?
"This is bad... my 2nd level won't work on a opponent like him.. Do I have to use my 3rd level? It's been a secret but no one is here besides us so I have no choice.."
"I grant thee third level potential one year of my life, please make a miracle happen!"
Then in a moment I felt the time of my life span withdrawn but miraculously a plan to win came in my mind.
"Miya please let me see that"
Then Miya quickly handed Ice the bag she was carrying and Ice quickly took out a mysterious item.
"It's over Ice.. give up now and I'll let you off with a arm and a leg hahaha."
"After you revealed your potential..this match was already decided."
"What?" as the boy questioned.
"Your ability is to make a clear aura around me to make the water change.. but it also means that any water near me will turn either hot,cold. or poisonous depending on your command."
"S-so? what about it? your words won't scare me" the mysterious boy looked in fear.
"You know what this is right?, It's a canteen full of water... Actually it would be poison now huh?"
"Crap... I GRANT THEE -" as the boy spoke
"Too late."
In a moment of seconds Ice opened the canteen and slashed the ooze like liquid on the mysterious boy causing the boy to cry in agony and pain.
"Game, set, match, ERASE."
"AHHH IT BURNS.... YOU.. YOU... THE SIGMA'S WONT BE QUIET ABOUT THIS!"
In a flash the boy's existence disappeared, otherwise known as erased.
"Umm thank you for your help.." as Miya finally spoke with a scared tone.
"No prob! haha."
THUMP!
Suddenly the cute girl collapsed in the wet ground while the rain pours on her hard in the midst of her smiling.
This is so cliche... a guy saving a girl he like this haha. as Ice thought to himself.
"I better take her home before she gets sick."
"Interesting.. a beta using up to level 3 of his potential and winning against a sigma.. kukuku... I'll be expecting more Ice Elwood." Then the mysterious man dispersed into the darkness.
"Weird. I felt someone's presence.. I guess not."
Potential rule 1: A person erased will reincarnate to a new without his potential ability..
CHAPTER 1 END
TO BE CONTINUED.
Please comment and critique my light novel. I took in a few advices from /a/ and will try to redo this story once i get more advices.
Tuesday, December 20, 2011
Obsolete Potential. Chapter 1. (Iminonai Kanousei)
It is the 22nd century where every place on earth is filled with potential users, or non potentials users, otherwise known as the "Obsoletes". With the new system of potentials, many obsoletes have suffered the loneliness,despair, and worst case; the death otherwise known as "Erase" from the hands of potential users.....
"Fuck this!" As Zence Kisaragi screamed out with anguish.
He looked around to see if anyone saw him scream.
"No one.." Just as I thought. "Hahaha..."
Another day, another boring time of the day. School.
The time and day where all the cool kids will get with the girls or vice versa the girls teasing the guys.
School is also where most potential users gather to find the Obsoletes or where the Obsoletes find a way to erase the Potentials.
School was now a place filled with government's secretly hired students to erase all the Obsoletes to make the "Perfect world" in the eyes of the government.
Kisaragi was one of them.
12:00PM September 08/ 211X
"Kisaragi Come over here and clean up this mess you made!" As the teacher yelled at him full of annoyance and disgust.
Fucking Obsolete telling me what to do... as Kisaragi thought to himself
He put down his PSP9000 and slowly walked over to the closet full of brooms and slowly creeped over to the mess on the ground
"HURRY UP AND WALK FASTER!" as Goro Sensei yelled to him.
"GOD DAMN IT I KNOW!"
"Fuck."... Did I say that out loud just now? He couldn't help but think what would happen now would only be 1. Detention. 2. Clean up of the whole classroom. 3. Act first and erase the Obsolete.
Goro sensei just shook his head and walked off without saying anything
Wow, he must feel disappointed in me haha. Like I care. as Zence thought.
"Haha Zence why are you such a delinquent man, that won't get you anywhere with the ladies" as Hikaru Tomonori said.
Who is Hikaru you say? He's my best childhood friend since 2nd grade and probably the only person I would never kill even if he was an Obsolete.
"You know I hate school, and all the people in it" As I said in a annoying tone.
"Yeah but , with the potential system it's better to have more friends than enemies" As Hikaru proclaimed.
"Well, I guess that's right. Oh, well class is about to start so I'll see you later Hikaru"
Even if you're a Obsolete... I'll protect you.. my friend..
3:00PM September 08/211X
Finally school finished...I guess I'll go catch up on that anime Case Geese once i get home..
The rain started pouring and all you can see now is the couples under one umbrella while they talk about their meaning love life...
"Guh!" As i accidentally claimed.
Is...Is that a girl dancing in the rain....?
Then I saw a glimpse of her... She had blonde hair, a small face, and had mysterious aura around her that would make you just go out and dance with her in the rain.
"Zence wait up!!" as i hear Hikaru screaming from 3 miles away. And I turn around to wave at him.
Honestly. How loud can he be?
As I turn back, I don't see the girl anymore,
Where could she have gone? as I ponder.
5:00PM September 08/211X
"Alright cya tomorrow!" As I yell while we part off.
I have to get rid of one Obsolete by this month or I'll be- As I was thinking, I saw the mysterious girl again. As I approach her, I also see two mysterious man walk up to her in the dark alley here
Weird.. I secretly spy on the interaction and see the mysterious man suddenly attack the girl with his potential power.
Is that his potential ability...? Is it either the potential of strength increase or potential of bone hardening? What level potential can it be? As I was wondering the girl was getting attacked I stood there thinking of what I should plan to do.
"Should I help..?" "What if she's an Obsolete and the Potentials are just doing there job?" "Should I help the potentials..?"
I can't just stand here I have to do something at least.
"FUCK THIS!"
"h-h- Hey I don't think it's fair to go 2vs1 against a Obsolete don't you think?" As I stated with a little nervousness, recklessness, and a little bit of a shaky tone.
"Hahaha Kid you should watch out before you get hurt" As the Man said with a little cockiness.
The Rule and Basicsof Potentials and Obsoletes.
1. A potential has all rights to kill an Obsolete if he/she has proof that he/she is an Obsolete.
2. A fight against a potential and a potential is only allowed if the government has given permission to do so.
3. Use of potentials on any government hired potential users will deem the attackers as an "Vigilant"
4. Giving an Obsolete a potential through a machine or genetically inhumane way is illegal therefore defined as "Vigilant".
5. If an Obsolete becomes a Potential user through hard training, he/she is also a potential user of Level G..
6. There are 7 Levels of potentials, and 3 types of potentials.
7. Level A,B,C,D,E,F,G, are the levels of the Potentials, with level A being the strongest. with only 3 known til this day.
8. The 3 types of Potentials known are, Mental, Physical, Creativity potential.
9. There are currently 255 known potential users til this day.
10. The outcome of using potential varies upon the person.
"I see you're a potential user as well, My name is Zence. Yours?"
"Hey kid, I'm a vigilant so I have no right to give off my name to a brat like you, but I'll tell you one thing, my potential is to increase my strength by two folds for the cost of- Haha I can't tell you anymore than this."
The strange man steadily rushes towards Zence with his potential enlisted fist.
But in a flash, all we see is the man collapsed on the floor with his existence being "Erased".
"Fool, For one, a vigilant should never fight against a Gov. Potential user like me.and two, a potential user should never reveal his potential to anyone. not even his or her loved one."
"w-w-w-what the hell... YOU'RE A MONSTER GET AWAY. FROM ME!" As the 2nd mysterious man fears as if he has seen death in front of him."
Too Late hahahaha.
"STOP!!!" As the girl behind Zence cries.
"Please don't kill any one... It's not right.. please let the man go..he only wanted to see If i was an obsolete or a potential user.." The girl is crying as if something precious has died of hers.
"He tried to kill you, He's a vigilant... why do you want to let him go so bad?"
"Please... let him go..." As the girl cries more.
" FUCK THIS!, SCRAM!. Don't ever come back here again." As i sound pissed.
The man quickly runs away into the deeper dark alley while tripping and falling.
"I can't believe i used my potential on such weak pathetic human like this"
"Thank you..." As the girl had a smile on her face while crying.
THUMP!
The girl suddenly collapsed and hit her head hard on the ground.
How cliche can this get.... honestly? As i think in my head.
"The hell did I just see...Zence is a potential user...?" as Hikaru thought with nervousness and secretly ran off in the dark
fuck this.. As Zence carried her all the way to his home. Wet in the rain thinking how nice the girl smells as the girls hair shines in the rain.
But what he didn't realize, was the start of a whole new life that was ready for him.
Remaining potential users: 254.
Chapter 1 End.
To be continued....
Hey guys! Well, this was chapter one.. Please comment and tell me if it was good or bad and what I can improve on. This is my first time doing a light novel sort of novella so i can use all the criticism i can get. Thanks you! If you like my story please share this blog or book mark it as well! Thanks and see you guys later!
"Fuck this!" As Zence Kisaragi screamed out with anguish.
He looked around to see if anyone saw him scream.
"No one.." Just as I thought. "Hahaha..."
Another day, another boring time of the day. School.
The time and day where all the cool kids will get with the girls or vice versa the girls teasing the guys.
School is also where most potential users gather to find the Obsoletes or where the Obsoletes find a way to erase the Potentials.
School was now a place filled with government's secretly hired students to erase all the Obsoletes to make the "Perfect world" in the eyes of the government.
Kisaragi was one of them.
12:00PM September 08/ 211X
"Kisaragi Come over here and clean up this mess you made!" As the teacher yelled at him full of annoyance and disgust.
Fucking Obsolete telling me what to do... as Kisaragi thought to himself
He put down his PSP9000 and slowly walked over to the closet full of brooms and slowly creeped over to the mess on the ground
"HURRY UP AND WALK FASTER!" as Goro Sensei yelled to him.
"GOD DAMN IT I KNOW!"
"Fuck."... Did I say that out loud just now? He couldn't help but think what would happen now would only be 1. Detention. 2. Clean up of the whole classroom. 3. Act first and erase the Obsolete.
Goro sensei just shook his head and walked off without saying anything
Wow, he must feel disappointed in me haha. Like I care. as Zence thought.
"Haha Zence why are you such a delinquent man, that won't get you anywhere with the ladies" as Hikaru Tomonori said.
Who is Hikaru you say? He's my best childhood friend since 2nd grade and probably the only person I would never kill even if he was an Obsolete.
"You know I hate school, and all the people in it" As I said in a annoying tone.
"Yeah but , with the potential system it's better to have more friends than enemies" As Hikaru proclaimed.
"Well, I guess that's right. Oh, well class is about to start so I'll see you later Hikaru"
Even if you're a Obsolete... I'll protect you.. my friend..
3:00PM September 08/211X
Finally school finished...I guess I'll go catch up on that anime Case Geese once i get home..
The rain started pouring and all you can see now is the couples under one umbrella while they talk about their meaning love life...
"Guh!" As i accidentally claimed.
Is...Is that a girl dancing in the rain....?
Then I saw a glimpse of her... She had blonde hair, a small face, and had mysterious aura around her that would make you just go out and dance with her in the rain.
"Zence wait up!!" as i hear Hikaru screaming from 3 miles away. And I turn around to wave at him.
Honestly. How loud can he be?
As I turn back, I don't see the girl anymore,
Where could she have gone? as I ponder.
5:00PM September 08/211X
"Alright cya tomorrow!" As I yell while we part off.
I have to get rid of one Obsolete by this month or I'll be- As I was thinking, I saw the mysterious girl again. As I approach her, I also see two mysterious man walk up to her in the dark alley here
Weird.. I secretly spy on the interaction and see the mysterious man suddenly attack the girl with his potential power.
Is that his potential ability...? Is it either the potential of strength increase or potential of bone hardening? What level potential can it be? As I was wondering the girl was getting attacked I stood there thinking of what I should plan to do.
"Should I help..?" "What if she's an Obsolete and the Potentials are just doing there job?" "Should I help the potentials..?"
I can't just stand here I have to do something at least.
"FUCK THIS!"
"h-h- Hey I don't think it's fair to go 2vs1 against a Obsolete don't you think?" As I stated with a little nervousness, recklessness, and a little bit of a shaky tone.
"Hahaha Kid you should watch out before you get hurt" As the Man said with a little cockiness.
The Rule and Basicsof Potentials and Obsoletes.
1. A potential has all rights to kill an Obsolete if he/she has proof that he/she is an Obsolete.
2. A fight against a potential and a potential is only allowed if the government has given permission to do so.
3. Use of potentials on any government hired potential users will deem the attackers as an "Vigilant"
4. Giving an Obsolete a potential through a machine or genetically inhumane way is illegal therefore defined as "Vigilant".
5. If an Obsolete becomes a Potential user through hard training, he/she is also a potential user of Level G..
6. There are 7 Levels of potentials, and 3 types of potentials.
7. Level A,B,C,D,E,F,G, are the levels of the Potentials, with level A being the strongest. with only 3 known til this day.
8. The 3 types of Potentials known are, Mental, Physical, Creativity potential.
9. There are currently 255 known potential users til this day.
10. The outcome of using potential varies upon the person.
"I see you're a potential user as well, My name is Zence. Yours?"
"Hey kid, I'm a vigilant so I have no right to give off my name to a brat like you, but I'll tell you one thing, my potential is to increase my strength by two folds for the cost of- Haha I can't tell you anymore than this."
The strange man steadily rushes towards Zence with his potential enlisted fist.
But in a flash, all we see is the man collapsed on the floor with his existence being "Erased".
"Fool, For one, a vigilant should never fight against a Gov. Potential user like me.and two, a potential user should never reveal his potential to anyone. not even his or her loved one."
"w-w-w-what the hell... YOU'RE A MONSTER GET AWAY. FROM ME!" As the 2nd mysterious man fears as if he has seen death in front of him."
Too Late hahahaha.
"STOP!!!" As the girl behind Zence cries.
"Please don't kill any one... It's not right.. please let the man go..he only wanted to see If i was an obsolete or a potential user.." The girl is crying as if something precious has died of hers.
"He tried to kill you, He's a vigilant... why do you want to let him go so bad?"
"Please... let him go..." As the girl cries more.
" FUCK THIS!, SCRAM!. Don't ever come back here again." As i sound pissed.
The man quickly runs away into the deeper dark alley while tripping and falling.
"I can't believe i used my potential on such weak pathetic human like this"
"Thank you..." As the girl had a smile on her face while crying.
THUMP!
The girl suddenly collapsed and hit her head hard on the ground.
How cliche can this get.... honestly? As i think in my head.
"The hell did I just see...Zence is a potential user...?" as Hikaru thought with nervousness and secretly ran off in the dark
fuck this.. As Zence carried her all the way to his home. Wet in the rain thinking how nice the girl smells as the girls hair shines in the rain.
But what he didn't realize, was the start of a whole new life that was ready for him.
Remaining potential users: 254.
Chapter 1 End.
To be continued....
Hey guys! Well, this was chapter one.. Please comment and tell me if it was good or bad and what I can improve on. This is my first time doing a light novel sort of novella so i can use all the criticism i can get. Thanks you! If you like my story please share this blog or book mark it as well! Thanks and see you guys later!
A Light Novel here on Blogger.
This is Zetta with an blog coming up on this blogger site just to publish my ideas for a light novel or heck, to even get published this way.
I'll update any of my stories at least once a week if I can and have time to do so.
If you think my stories are good, please post it on other sites to promote me as well! It will be a great help in reaching my dream.
I'll update any of my stories at least once a week if I can and have time to do so.
If you think my stories are good, please post it on other sites to promote me as well! It will be a great help in reaching my dream.
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